you've got nice line quality--varied value and open form.
the shadows in the torso are deceiving/confusing. here is where it would really help to keep the structure of the rib cage still really visible in the drawing.
If you've got that tilt of the pelvis, then the gluteal cleft would tilt with it, making more of a perpindicular line to the tilt, rather than vertical as it is here.
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you've got nice line quality--varied value and open form.
the shadows in the torso are deceiving/confusing. here is where it would really help to keep the structure of the rib cage still really visible in the drawing.
If you've got that tilt of the pelvis, then the gluteal cleft would tilt with it, making more of a perpindicular line to the tilt, rather than vertical as it is here.
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